"If this continues as good as it starts, I'll read it...."
(Two days later.)
" I read Tempus Fugit. Time travel stories can be tricky, because of problems of paradox, but you address that nicely... The story is fast moving, interesting, and does something that helps keep the inevitable confusions clear: it keeps a narrow focus, with most action kept between two people at a time, one of which is always the main character. Thus I didn't have to wonder who was involved with whom. So it was a fast and easy read."